Haiku #1833: Gritter Lorry

Pink crystals
pinging paintwork
cruising grit lorry.

–Benjamin F Jones 
Pink crystals

Pink crystals

About Graphite Bunny

I am a writer working in South Wales (UK). I love pizza, photography and moist clay. When it rains I catch drops in my open mouth. I create poetry, flash, absurdist snapshots and humorous fiction.
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3 Responses to Haiku #1833: Gritter Lorry

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  2. Is it cold in Wales just now? I haven’t even got the heating on today, here, in East Sussex. I like your haiku. I can almost hear the crystals ping. Not too good for one’s car paintwork when it happens, though.

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