Haiku #0546: Late for work

Refrigerator bus
oil pressure failure
bitter commuters fidget.

–Benjamin F Jones 
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About Graphite Bunny

I am a writer working in South Wales (UK). I love pizza, photography and moist clay. When it rains I catch drops in my open mouth. I create poetry, flash, absurdist snapshots and humorous fiction.
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2 Responses to Haiku #0546: Late for work

  1. Hee, hee. That’s great …well, not the bit about being frozen, but it’s a really well-painted image. At least the commuters don’t kill the public transport workers in this country. I remember reading about some angry commuters in Japan bludgeoning a railway worker to death because their train was late.

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