Listening to the cuckoo
looking up into trees
I step on a snail.
You really pulled a laugh outta me!!
Thank you. Sometimes my sense of humour can be a little skewed.
Oh, crunch D: I always feel really guilty when I tread on a snail, but this haiku does have a wonderful streak of dark comedy. It did make me laugh, and it’s very well written.
Thank you. I was trying to sum up my work in an exercise the other day – there is a rather dark seam of humour that runs just under the surface and I try to keep buried.
Each word perfectly fits.
Thank you very much for your support in general – not just for this piece. x
Perfect (though unhappy for the snail)
Thank you – and yes I felt very bad about the snail.
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